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Need Critique/Review Of Site and Advert
Introduction
Note: Some links here lead to pages than ask you to buy my stuff. You don’t have too unless you want to. I put this note in for politeness sake. I need a review of my main site and the advertising I'm sending out. I am selling posters, prints, greeting cards, post cards, note cards, tote bags, aprons, mousepads, calendars and occasion cards made from pictures taken in northeastern New Mexico. The web site is Vistas of Northeastern New Mexico. The pictures range from baby bunnies to storms and sunsets. All items can be customized via the Zazzle customization interface. I make a 10% royalty on all sales. Zazzle handles the manufacturing, shipping, billing and customer service. The basic selling points are:
First Attempt At Selling My first attempt at selling was not good. I sent out 600,000 e-mails targeted at buyers of gifts in the USA. I used this HTML E-mail ad (click to view) with the three randomly assigned subject lines "Gifts From Northeastern New Mexico", "Vistas of Northeastern New Mexico" and "Custom Gifts From Northeastern New Mexico". According the e-mailer, I got a open rate of 4.72% and 1582 click-thrus (2.64% click thru rate) from the E-mail. The Zazzle web site counter gave 2600 hits as a result of the e-mail campaign, for a response rate of 0.43%. This happens because the E-mailer sends the ad to not only to individuals, but web sites that accept advertising. However, I got no sales. This angered me, so I decided to do something about it. What I Did About It On the Zazzle site, I looked and found that:
The part that is really stumping me is the HTML E-mail ad. I only got a 2.64% click thru rate and no sales. I want to do better. Please review this ad (click here) and tell me what I need to do. Comments, rewrites and any suggestions are welcome. Please post everything to the forum so that all can benefit. If you don't think I need to change the HTML ad (or anything else), please say why. Thank you for your help. |
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Hi. Great photos. I was out that way a couple of years ago - loved it!
The products are OK, but I'd like to recommend that you put in some lines of text so that the customer can warm up to you. You need to identify with him or her before you list all your products and encourage them to buy. Use something like, "Living out here in beautiful New Mexico allows me to view the beauty of the outdoors everyday. I just can't get enough of it. Every time my friends come to visit me from out east, they always want to get pictures to remember their short visit. "I've taken some pictures to share with them and I want to share this beauty that I see every day with all of my visitors. Here are some of my best pictures - designed for your everyday use." "You can get these pictures on your favorite products that I offer and show them to your friends and family so they can enjoy this beauty, too. If you want, you can also add your own message..." I think this idea will help if you tune it some as needed. Another way to get ideas is to look at your competitors' Web sites and see what they are doing that works. |
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I have revised the site according to comments from people who responded to this thread. Please go to StormShooter - Zazzle Contributor Gallery
Thank you for your help. |
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Site Reviews
Try linking up with Rhino Seo. You can see comparisons against your competitors, track leads, and compare the keywords your using for effectiveness. You can also check all of that information on your competitors. That might help you out a little and its a free service offered by Rhinoseo.
Here is the link: Web Analytics | Rhino SEO | Competitor Comparison Tools |
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Hi AdRaptor,
The advertising you are doing is not the most effective in the world. Usually the quality of leads you get with this type of advertising is crap and over advertised to. Change your approach! Use article marketing, bloggin and social marketing. The results will definitely follow. |
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If I may suggest, you can work a little more on your site. It can look a little more appealing with those beautiful pictures. Agree with houcemtrigun, advertising can get people visit you once, but if they dont find it appealing they wont come back you know.
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